tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1966268702453044660.post863398636964798171..comments2024-02-29T00:38:48.299-08:00Comments on Sand, Cider and Spaceships: The Worker - Part 3Drackarnhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13450640948811964177noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1966268702453044660.post-39669237211148660502017-12-07T13:07:47.079-08:002017-12-07T13:07:47.079-08:00I really liked the ending and its open enough that...I really liked the ending and its open enough that you can always return to the story from one of 3 perspectives I say good job :)Edek Hawkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14863659903803745851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1966268702453044660.post-91557194432315061062016-03-11T19:34:58.303-08:002016-03-11T19:34:58.303-08:00I am not fond of the end - I would have shortened ...I am not fond of the end - I would have shortened it somewhat, like this:<br /><br />---<br />The video stopped with the words "VIDEO DELETED" flashing in big red letters.<br /><br />A scream of anger and frustration broke the renewed silence of the room."<br />---<br /><br />and leave the rest up to the imagination of the reader.<br /><br />That said, I enjoyed the story!Druur Monakhhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07299435488090977357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1966268702453044660.post-39026083024999794672016-03-04T03:57:08.048-08:002016-03-04T03:57:08.048-08:00Yeah sorry, it was rushed. This week has been hell...Yeah sorry, it was rushed. This week has been hell and got to Friday morning (first day of the weekend) with nothing. So tried to get something done.<br />Noctis does however splat Serpentis rats. I killed five cruiser rats with the flight of light drones it can carry. Also Fanason was piloting the ship. She wasn't industry crew, she was ex Federal Navy. <br />Hopefully I won't be wondering if I'm going to be out of a job next week and have to leave the country. I'll have a think about the PVE stuff you mentioned though. "The Hunted"? :)Drackarnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13450640948811964177noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1966268702453044660.post-76992670532814495842016-03-04T02:58:32.390-08:002016-03-04T02:58:32.390-08:00Sorry Drack but you rushed the ending, shifted mai...Sorry Drack but you rushed the ending, shifted main characters and unfortunately lost the thread of the story.<br /><br />I was interested to see how your story would evolve as they worked to escape the incursion and the serpentis, I was kind of hoping you would explore the PVE style of jump, ping, bounce, cloak, hide and wait for the perfect opportunity to jump out via the gate. The Industrial PVP that most pew pew'ers just don't get or understand and wont acknowledge as PVP. Additionally it's been awhile since I took a noctis out but I don't remember using combat drones on one, probably just my bad memory and I am not in front of EVE atm to check so forgive me if I have misspoken, but just seemed like you took a short cut to getting the Indy crew out when they would have used a more passive method to extract. Please don't take all this the wrong way, I am only one reader and most likely I don't reflect the majority, thank you greatly for your post and I do enjoy the Friday reads.<br /><br />SLyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com